Comments on: Prime Rhyme Slime Sentences

By: blake

blake — Thu, 24 Jul 2008 02:05:30 +0000

his name was jack he was dressed in black his middle name was slack and his last name was hack his car was a cadilac he drove like a maniac that it explains his middle name slack he owned a race track and his camera is kodak but the lense had a crack well time for a snack
by blake

By: mrgamble6

mrgamble6 — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 22:14:49 +0000

Nice Jack, good comments Katie and I liked Declan’s too – it did my head in!

By: Kaitie

Kaitie — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 08:06:23 +0000

i really likes declens ted, fred and his red dog ned it really good.

By: jack

jack — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 06:07:58 +0000

There was a guy called bape and he liked to rap but one day he fell in a trap under a tap and he lost his lucky cap and he had a map to guide his yap and a guy laughed what are you doing young chap then he replied just looking for a place to nap BY JACK SORRY NO AUTOGRAPHS!!!

By: Emma

Emma — Mon, 21 Jul 2008 06:00:49 +0000

Gabby i think you need a real name

By: jack

jack — Sat, 19 Jul 2008 10:08:45 +0000

There was a boy called jack he was a little slack and had a mouse called kodak and he was black and he drove a 78 cadaillac he had a job but he got the sack his job was as easy as finding a needle in a haystack.

By: zoe

zoe — Sat, 19 Jul 2008 06:33:52 +0000

kyra yours was cool i liked it!!!!

By: Frank from the bank

Frank from the bank — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 10:40:08 +0000

COON MOON DOON
a baboon went to the moon it was made of coon when the racoon went a loon racoon harpoon it is a tycoon in the saloon were the baffoon

By: tom

tom — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 07:01:50 +0000

m.r g i cant post game as a comment

By: Declan

Declan — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 10:22:39 +0000

I like yours Ben its funny